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雅思写作开头这样写 真是逆天了!

中英网  www.uker.net  2015-09-08   来源: 转载   编辑: Alice

编者按:用一些逻辑比如追根溯源,对比,细节特征,叙事性开头,以此来秀出自己的想法,然后再引出观点,给出自我认知。

用一些逻辑比如追根溯源,对比,细节特征,叙事性开头,以此来秀出自己的想法,然后再引出观点,给出自我认知。

追根溯源

就是分析一个观点出现的原因,很多写作话题都是社会现象,必然有它的一个背景性的原因在里面,就可以加以分析。

举个例子,

题目:Foreigntourists should be charged more than local people when they visit cultural andhistorical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with thisopinion?

如何追根来引出话题呢?

示范:The continuing boom of the international tourism whichis to a large extent derived from the advancement of long-distance air travelhas made it more available for people to travel further, however the up surge ofthe tourists is blamed for damaging of the historical sites, thus many reach theconsensus that the foreign tourist should be charged more as one way toconstrain the deteriorating of historical attractions. for my part, however, itis too rash to make such a decision concerning the following.

是不是引出来了呢,同时也秀出了自己不是?

对比

分为时间性对比和地域性对比。

例,Gone are the days whenpeople travel on horseback for several to a tourist destination; we,contemporarily, can get to every corner within several hours by the highefficient flight, which give a great push to the boom of international tourismwhich is considered to contribute to the damage of the local historical sites.Therefore some advocate the high charge on the foreigners, which, from my part,is a rash decision. 时间性对比就出来了。

细节特征描述

这个比较难,但是比较能够挑战高分,还是这个题目,我们给出它的细节描述:

The wonder anddesire of the historical sites such as the great pyramids in Egypt, the warriorterra cotta in china and the garden in the heaven in Babylon attracts explorersall over the world to visit, which is blamed for the damage of the sites, thussome consider the higher charge on the foreigner so as to protect the touristdestinations. While for me, I consider it as a rash decision to make.

当然还有就是叙事性开头了,可以是新闻故事的描述,可以是某个现象的陈述,同一题目,再来看一例子,when you are wandering inthe street, particularly in the historical cities, you would be astonished to beencountered with so many foreigners surrounding you, which is thought to bebrought by the continuing international tourism. Whereas, this may to someextent lead to cultural invasion as well as architectural vandalism, leading tothe view of higher charge on the foreigners. While I think this is far frombeing a root conclusion.

看到这里,童鞋们可能觉得上面的几个开头似乎有点长。但是好的句式不怕长,总比那些生硬套模板的要好很多吧!

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