复杂句越多雅思写作分越高?这还真不是
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高分句型不代表复杂的句型。从句是高分句型的一种,但是除了从句你还知道其他的句型吗?用了复杂句式却影响了文章的流畅性以及逻辑性,是不是鱼和熊掌不可兼得?今天我们就来看看用什么样的句子又能的高分,又能保证文章的流畅度!
考官评分标准中最后一项GRA (grammatical range and accuracy),明确考察的是学生写英语句子多样性和准确性的能力,即测试考生简单句和复杂句的综合运用能力。
而中国考生也知道句式表达要多样性,但很难参透具体如何操作才能让自己的句子丰富多样,结果是普遍句式比较单一,写到复杂结构时往往就是堆斥各种从句,似乎除了从句再无其它复杂结构可写。
事实上,剑桥考官的范文中,复杂句的数量寥寥可数,很多时候都是把简单句进行了华丽的包装,今天就来看看考官喜欢的“高分句型是什么样的,和你想象的是不是有差距!
1.状语前置
所谓状语前置就是把状语(副词,介词短语,分词,不定式)放到句首。考官会频繁使用这种语法结构,而很多考生却没有意识,这种句式通过一堆长句子中出现一个小短语,可以让句子产生长短结合的紧凑感,实例如下:
1)Unfortunately, professionals from otherfields who make a much greater contributions to human society, are paid so muchless that it is hard to disagree with the statement.
2)Obviously, education systems are based onthe belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire differentskills.
3)Like self-awareness,this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factorsthat may be most important for achieving happiness.
4)As a result of mediaattention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities.
5)With the politicalwill, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.
6)Struggling inpoverty, people in these countries believe international aid is essential andshould be continued.
7)To do this, we needto improve the choice of public transport services available to individuals.
8)To become successful,more skills and dedication are required.
2.句中插入短语
和状语前置类似,长句子中间插入一个小短语,可以让句子读起来更轻松灵活。考官实例如下:
1)This will affect the job market, which, afterall, is a key target in any economic plan.
2)Sports stars and pop stars,for example, are soon replaced by the neat younger, more energetic generation.
3)So overall, I believethat, attending schools from a young age is good for most children.
4)Universities, when itis functioning well, should offer both theoretical knowledge as well asprofessional training.
3.倒装句
这种语法现象考生都学过,但往往在作文中忘记或没有意识使用。先看两个例子:
1)Parents should spend time on theirchildren. They should also communicate with them.
2) We can never losesight of the significance of education.
这两个句子没有任何错误,但都很单调平淡,如果使用倒装,效果就不一样了。
第一句可以用not only /but also 句型来改写成倒装句:Not only should parents spent time on their children, they are alsoadvised to interact with them.
第二句可以否定词提前,强调突出“不可忽视”。On no account/by nomeans/ in no way/never can we lose sight of the significance of education.
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