不要总以有生命的名词和人称代词开头（受汉语表达习惯的影响, to use I, People and We, 开头）；

不要千篇一律的使用主动语态；

不要总是用（如果）（因为）（当）等口语意味较重的句子，要注意使用书面语体的句子；

不要对动词过分依赖，要学会用动词名词化来表达；

不用总是用肯定句来表达，要学会用否定句子表达肯定的意思；

恰当的使用排比句和平行句

Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.

We are making great efforts to improve our English.

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If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good results.

The style. of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.

Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost.

Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisement.

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